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I don't talk much, please don't talk to me. Thank you.

Nick Rodriguez @Nickapassa

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The Lonely Loner

Posted by Nickapassa - September 4th, 2009


He just stands there, looking down.
Hands in his big black sweater's pockets.
Long red hair over his eyes.
Standing, quiet as the long dead.
A breeze rolls along his hair sways to the soft breeze.
He's quiet, still as a dead clock's second hand.
His black jacket hoody doesn't move.
The lonely loner walks away, hands still in his pockets.
Not showing emotion, quiet, still as the dead.

By me.


Comments

Nice Job, but I have to admit. It doesn't have a sad quality to it, which is what I'm guessing was your intent. Instead, it seems to be boring. Still, I can see the skill.

No, I was going for a mysterious effect, but thanks.

Emo kid.

Nah, I just don't talk much. Why would you say that?